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Out of breath from running so far, I crashed into the hospital doors, forcing them open. Rushing up to the counter, I immediately caught the assistant's attention.

"Can I help you, sir?"

Panting and holding onto my knees for support, I managed to say, "I'm looking for ____ ____."

She checked her computer screen. "Sorry sir, but I'm afraid  I can't allow you to see her. She's in surgery right now. As soon as we know anything, we'll tell you alright?"

I jerked my head up, a look of panic spreading across my face. I nodded submissively and went to take a seat in the waiting room.

-Several minutes previously-

I sighed, looking around my dirty living room. I should have expected it to end up like this after asking my neighbor, Alfred to house watch for me while I was away on a business trip, but of course, I underestimated the rowdy, loud-mouthed American's abilities to annihilate a room in just two days. I had just wanted to relax after arriving back home, but alas, I wouldn't be getting my wish.

But before I could even touch the vacuum, my cellphone vibrated against my leg. Frustrated, I grabbed it and saw it was Francis.

"Look Francis, as much as I would love to listen you annoy the crap out of me or hear about your latest one night stand, I just don't have time to put up with you right now!" I was practically shouting into the phone. I paused to breathe, and expected to hear a snide remark from the speaker.

All I could hear was crying.

"A-Arthur," Francis sobbed. "It's _____. She...She's..." More Crying.

"I'm at ze 'ospital. You n-need to get down 'ere. St Vincent's." He ended the call.

My heart beating faster, I sprinted out the door, not even bothering to lock it.
My first Hetalia Fanfiction! Yay! It probably isn't very good, as I only briefly looked over it for mistakes and I suck at writing, but it could be worse. If you like it, please comment saying such. I do plan on writing more, but if no one really likes it, then i might not finish the story. PLEASE MOTIVATE ME!

Chapter 1: YOU ARE HERE.
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]

Hetalia belongs to :iconhimaruyaplz:

The storyline belongs to moi!:icongingeralchemist:

You belong to whomever you'd like.
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:icondoublerainbow-girl:
doublerainbow-girl Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WAT HAPPPENED TO READER?
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:icongingeralchemist:
GingerAlchemist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
[link] Here's the second chapter if you'd like to read it.
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:icondoublerainbow-girl:
doublerainbow-girl Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i will ^^"
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:iconroronoa-d-riku:
Roronoa-D-Riku Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no !!!! when france crys and runs to england, shit happens...MOAR!!!
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:icongingeralchemist:
GingerAlchemist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
[link] Here's the second chapter if you'd like to read it.
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:iconlittlelepracaun:
littlelepracaun Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
In the name of HRE I command you to write MOAR! :iconmoarplz:
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:icongingeralchemist:
GingerAlchemist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
[link] HERE YOU GO.
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:iconhetaliagirl101:
hetaliagirl101 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Zomg!What happened?!!Moar please?? :iconmoarplz:(thats not exactly the face I wanted but you get my point XD)
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:icongingeralchemist:
GingerAlchemist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
[link] If you're interested, here's the second chapter
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:iconhetaliagirl101:
hetaliagirl101 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course I am!!
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