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I could hear the blood pounding in my ears as we followed the nurse through the E.R. My heart beat was racing at what must have been a million miles an hour.


After what seemed like centuries(though it was most likely only a few minutes), she halted outside of a room.


"Wait here for a minute. I'll check to see if she's stable enough for you to see her." She disappeared through the door.


We stood there in silence for a little while, before she poked her head back through the doorway.


"You can see her now, but please, try to keep your voices to a minimum." And with that, I took a deep breath, and followed Francis into the room.


I wasn't ready for the sight that met my eyes. Had I not known that ______ was lying in that bed, I would have assumed we had accidentally walked into the wrong room. She looked so pale and fragile, her head bandaged tightly. The white cloth, which obscured her usual shiny (h/c) hair, was stained with a dark red. A thick, bulky cast surrounded her left arm, as well as what parts of her torso were visible.  Her eyes were closed, as if she were asleep. At least, I hoped she was only asleep...


The man beside me let out a choked sob and rushed over to the bedside, grabbing the hand that wasn't attached to her broken arm. As for me, I felt frozen in place. It was all I could do not to collapse on the floor. To keep from crying out.


I felt tears glide down my cheeks as I stood there, trying to accept the truth lying in the bed across the room.

After a moment, I regained some of my composure, and turned to the woman with the clipboard.


"Will... Will she be alright? When she wakes up, will ______ be okay..?"


She sighed and looked down at the medical sheets, frowning. "She suffered a great deal of head trauma from the fall. Physically, she should make a full recovery, but mentally...." The nurse took a deep breath. "If she wakes up-"


Francis suddenly shifted his attention to her. "If? What do you mean, if? ______, she 'as to wake up! Si elle ne se réveille pas, je n'ai aucune idée quelle défectuosité font!" He broke down completely, slipping into his native tongue and falling into a metal chair up against the wall.


I looked towards him in shock. I wasn't sure what bewildered me more, the fact that Francis was crying over a girl he wasn't trying to get into his pants, or that I wasn't the one who had turned into a sobbing heap of depression at the news.

At least, not on the outside.
:icongingeralchemist:
Chapter 3 is finally here! :iconyayenglandplz:

Thank you for reading! Hopefully this chapter was slightly longer than the last two. It's still too short for my liking, but, whatever.

As for the french, I was too tired to actually translate the sentence myself(also i'm only in french 3, so i don't know most of what Francis said by heart) so I used a translator at dictionary.com. Hopefully it actually says what I meant to say.

Feedback is much appreciated!:iconiggysmilesplz:

Hetalia belongs to :iconhimaruyaplz:

Story line belongs to this chick.--->:icongingeralchemist: Whoever she is.

You belong to ME. So deal with it.

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: You are here!
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: ~coming soon~
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:icontenshinoakasuna:
Can't wait for the next chapter, too.
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~GingerAlchemist Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Here you go! [link]
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*Nuyy93 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist
i love it :) Can't wait for the next chapter :D
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~GingerAlchemist Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
[link] Here you go!
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:iconlaketree:
I have a question. Can I belong to Russia instead of you? Seems less creepy that way.

Also, so far the story is AMAZING and I can't wait to read more.
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~GingerAlchemist Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well we ALL belong to Mother Russia in the end.:icondancingrussiaplz:

Thank you!:iconblushplz:
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:iconlaketree:
I can deal with that and you're welcome
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:icongingeralchemist:
~GingerAlchemist Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Here's the next chapter, if you're interested. [link]
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:iconlaketree:
OMG yay thank you!
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