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Every day after the accident, I went to see ______.

I couldn't stay away, feeling as if i stopped visiting, her condition would worsen. It makes no sense, I know, but it did in my mind. From 11 am to 8 pm, I was there by the bedside, willing her to awake from her reclusive state, but she never did.

Sometimes Francis would stop by and say hello. Unfortunately, he could only visit on weekends, and even then it was only for a brief time. He traveled for his work, and that left him with little to no time to himself.

For some reason, it made me feel lonely.

Approaching the counter, I was greeted by a warm smile.

"Back again Arthur. You're on time, as usual."

I smiled back at the friendly receptionist. "It's only proper to be punctual. I am a gentleman after all. It is my duty to be on time.  I would hate to leave a lovely person such as yourself waiting." I winked.

Her cheeks turned pink. No matter how many times we had repeated that conversation over the last 8 months, it had never ceased to brighten her day.

"Well if that's all, I'll go on in." I started walking away.

"Wait Arthur! I almost forgot! They've changed Ms. _______'s room. She's now in the neurology wing, room 213."

I spun around. "What...?"

They had moved her out of Intensive care? Not even bothering to thank her, I sprinted to the room in question. I stopped outside the door.

Nervously, I peeked inside.

There she was, her eyes open, sitting up straight in bed.
Short chapter is short.:iconnoshitplz:

I know its bad.

It's bad.

It's really really bad. :iconmichaeljacksonplz:

(This is what happens when I don't get any sleep and instead stay up all night, listening to That Anime Show and studying for midterms. I get a little loopy.:iconsillyplz:)

Alright so I wrote this in the last 5 minutes of study, and I almost dumped it. I still might, but it's going in the general direction I want the story to.

I also don't know if it makes sense transitioning from the last chapter into this one, so please let me know if it is too confusing!

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: You are here!
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: ~coming soon~

(Looking for the next chapter? Look here for a reason it's not up yet. [link] )

Hetalia belongs to :iconhimaruyaplz:

The plot belongs to :icongingeralchemist:

You belong to :iconpenplz: THIS PEN!
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Asuye Jan 17, 2013  Student Writer
I love you for writing this gwaaaahhh
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GingerAlchemist Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love you for reading this!!!!:iconbrohugplz:
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Asuye Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
:iconsupertighthugplz:
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GingerAlchemist Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsupertighthugplz: Next chapter is up! [link]
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Asuye Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
AJRKHOSDJA YES! *attack hugs*
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MiraiTubby Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great! Keep going! :)
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GingerAlchemist Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
[link] Here's the next chapter if you'd like to read it.
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MiraiTubby Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much! :D I read about how you wrote this while you were sick an all so, I hope you'll be better soon. :hug:
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GingerAlchemist Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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I just read all five chapters right now and... They. Are. Amazing! They may be short, but the writing, plot, and way the characters are portrayed, in my opinion, are very well written. I love how this all is in Arthur's point of view as well. Great job! Can't wait till the next one :D
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